he stared at the sky. | a poem about war

He stared at the sky.

He stared at the sky,

It looked the same today, as yesterday and the day before that,

But something didn't feel quite right,

Maybe because he had walked more than ever in the last two days,

Or maybe because he hadn't eaten much besides bread and water.

But then again, he had never been very picky about these things.

So he supposed it was because he hadn't seen his best friend in a month,

Or any of his classmates and teachers from his bustling middle-high school.

But he dismissed that thought as soon as it appeared in his mind.

Perhaps the reason for this unsettling feeling in his stomach,

Was the things he had seen, the horrors that he had seen last week -

When he had seen the military aircrafts circling above them from the window,

When he had caught a glimpse of his school burning from the closed curtains,

When he had watched wordlessly as his home was set ablaze and turned to ash,

When he had seen all those lifeless bodies being-

Yes, maybe that was it.

The reason for that cold sensation, and those anxious sleepless nights.

And then he wondered, as he slowly climbed into the military truck,

Will there be warm bread? A friend? A school? And most importantly, a home?

There were a myriad of uncertainties, the destination known and unknown all at once

So he stared at the sky looking for some answers,

But it looked the same still, as yesterday and the day before that.

Hazy and filled with smoke.       ━ star


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The war in Ukraine needs no introduction. Normally, I tend to avoid mixing my writing with politics and controversy. But today, after more than a hundred days of war, destruction and cries - my pen called to me and I could not refuse to answer. 
 
Without talking about the geopolitical debate and disputes, I just want to recognize the civilians. The innocent children, who don't concern themselves with the economic crisis, or the military expansion. I wanted to highlight the things they care about through this poem - friends, school and food. We talk about the magnitude of the effects of the war, but here I simply want to point out the perspective of a young boy.

Urging everyone to send peaceful and positive vibrations in the environment, believe it or not - optimistic energy does make a difference to people's minds. Spread love around you and encourage everyone to do the same.

p.s. I now share my reading updates in the side pane of the blog, so maybe check that out? And everyone is more than welcome to start a discussion about books in the comments below :)

QOTD - What is one thing you're most scared of?

I'll start - I'm really scared of people breaking my trust.



Comments

  1. I have no words for this remarkable piece. The tone and the setting of the poem is so emotionally charged and resonant, the way you haven't explicitly mentioned the war, but its still conveyed and inferred through the words. Definitely a bit darker and more mature than your other poems, but you've executed this brilliantly! The theme is also deeply thoughtful, its not an adult's point of view - but this, I believe is even more touching. As children we all long for the same things, as adults however perspectives change. In that sense, this poem is different from all others. You are immensely talented, never stop writing.

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    1. Thank you so much for your encouragement, feel really good to see that people are able to connect to my work and read between the lines to understand what I want to convey ♡

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  2. Wow, this is truly heart-touching...hope this is all over soon and sending positive vibes to everyone around.

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    1. Sending love and strength to you too <33

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  3. Extraordinary work!

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  4. What a powerful and thought-provoking writing! The thing that appealed to me the most was perhaps how you have silently implied the war without actually voicing it definitely. That tone really spoke to me, children will not always know what to name the turmoil and destruction around them. They care about a few things and for them - family, friends and school are what make up their world. A slight displacement of those things is what affects them. Such a fresh and original outlook. Even for many of us now our world revolves around our families and to answer your question, my biggest fear is losing my family.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kinds words!

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  5. Thank you so much for giving us a moment to think about and reflect upon the destruction caused by the war.

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    1. Glad to see I can make a difference with my words!

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  6. The war has displaced hundreds of thousands of people across Ukraine, and I suppose this perfectly sums up the children's thoughts. The last few lines touched me more than anything else -- "myriad of uncertainties, destination know and unknown all at once" We cannot even begin to imagine the plight of those people, forced to flee from their homes without any concrete answer to their future. Such an in-depth and true-to-life reflection of a child's mindset!

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    1. This piece was a bit hard to write, but your comments make it worth it! Thank you so much <3

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    2. I saw that you read midnight children recently, I tried reading it a while ago but as you said its very difficult and complex. I suppose I'll give it a go once again in sometime.

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  7. I really love the tone of the poem, and especially the imagery. In the beginning the boy is staring at the sky but the reader doesn't actually realize the poem is about war. at the end however when we know the thought process and circumstance of the boy when you repeat the lines he stared at the sky//it looked the same//filled with smoke really hits different. thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of art with us.

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    1. Thank you for taking the time to leave your precious thoughts on my poem!

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  8. Such a spellbinding and moving work of art! Praying for the safety and well-being of people all over the world!

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  9. This was quite heartbreaking. Describing these details from the viewpoint of young boy makes it so gut-wrenching, when we see the children during wartime it is always such a tragic scene. I highly appreciate your understanding and maturity, to introspect what a child actually would go through, because children may not really be able to perceive the chaos around them. As you rightly pointed out - they don't really care about the political issues for them war is losing friends, and school and the warmth of a home. A profound piece, very very well done! Sending love and strength to everyone reading this.

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    1. Thank you for your beautiful words! Sending love and positivity to you too ♡♡♡

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  10. the description oh my god, spellbound by your words!

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  11. Moved by your depiction of a child's trauma during the war, could honestly visualize the tragic scenes and feel the pain through your words. Thank you so much for sharing your work with all of us.

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  12. tHe way you depct the tragedy of the war is rly heartbreaking to imagine what a child would go through during times of war is commendable...

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